Dear all,
We are moving to the last one-third of the semester. You are almost there (, so am I). We'll be focusing on the creative projects, and I strongly encourage you to revise your individual videos according to the comments that Louis gave.
Essay 3 is the last written work you are required of. You'll get my comments on your draft 2 to be returned tomorrow. I have to say: you finally have a clear concept of structure! But here are some overall comments:
1. When you choose to elaborate on 3 or several aspects, please explain why these aspects? Why are they the most important factors in your arguments?
2. How are these factors/aspects related to one another? Please note this will make it easier to have proper transitions among paragraphs.
3. Once you have structured your points logically, what's left is the depth of your arguments and the power of words you show in your writing. Your sentence structure also determines the flow of your writing, fluent or awkward, empty or solid with viewpoints.
For tomorrow, a young, beautiful, but senior CEO from a high (digital) tech company will come into class to give a talk on the making of promotional videos.
Reminder: Please save your first progress report and prepare the second one this week. I am expecting that you increase material in the report every week. From last week on, your minutes for the workshop hours can be done as a group.
Time slots for your essay conferencing will be posted after class.
See you!
ps. If you find any break time, I'll hope you continue reading~ That can include the material you read for your projects.
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